~DROP~ By Rashmi Talwar


~DROP~ By Rashmi Talwar

On a grass blade I glisten
Whisper on the rocky slide
Still is my whistle
Brave, my plight !

Look! I am Flirting with a cloudy slice
Now ! Rocking on a mountain top
Its bristles push me just a slight
Oh! How I wriggle in delight !

Flirting with a tiny nose
I tickle the cheek bones first
Then down the mount just a bit
I gently glide over lips to kiss

Oh My Love! What a beauteous sight
Up above and sometimes low
Darling, I snuggle in petals tonight
Romancing the arc of a rainbow

Tis only the First Ray that makes me merge
Within the Sun, its light, and its unfolding urge…….By Rashmi Talwar

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26 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by Anonymous on December 23, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    usse bhaley hi koi vasta abb na raha ho lekin …uske hissey ka waqt abb bhi tanha gujarta hai …!!

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  2. Posted by Autar mota on November 29, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    Perfect poem. Excellent thoughts. keep posting.

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    • Posted by Anonymous on November 29, 2011 at 5:10 PM

      Thanks v much Autar Mota Ji ……for ur precious comment …Thks so much for visiting and subscribing to this blog ….

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  3. Posted by shahana on November 27, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    such a nice piece…..it insists me to think of so many things….. the observation power is great …keep it up .all the best

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    • Posted by Anonymous on November 27, 2011 at 5:27 PM

      Sha My love thanks for ur lovely comment …..means a lot to me …best for u always and thanks for visiting this blog …..

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  4. Posted by Anonymous on November 25, 2011 at 9:40 PM

    Beautiful sensibility .. often a drop imbibes in herself that poise to drop yet with her might !

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  5. Posted by Vikram Jit Singh on November 25, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    star by star the night ebbs, drop by drop the day surges. charming lines, rashmi.

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    • Posted by Anonymous on November 26, 2011 at 12:43 PM

      No words Vikram Jit Singh Ji ….ur comment itself is poetic …..Thks dear for visiting this blog …I truely value ur continued support and encouragement !!

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  6. Posted by Anonymous on November 25, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    Dear Rashmi……You have put “LIFE” in the little “DROP” beautifully expressed….i can visualise in my mind its beauty & connection…..ALL I CAN SAY IS……LOVELY.

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  7. Posted by Dino! dindin!! on November 25, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    Awww.
    Such finely crafted delight of the dew drop.
    Exquisite.
    Exquisite.
    Exquisite.

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    • Posted by Anonymous on November 25, 2011 at 2:21 PM

      Thanks so much Din ….Such a Pleasure to have ur comment here .As a fab writer and poet Urself Ur comment means a lot to me !! …Thanks again for ur precious time and thks for visiting this blog …cheers !

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  8. Very very beautiful, touching and full of feeling. Let us have more of them. Congarts

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  9. Tusi tan chuphe Rustom nikle ji. Very subtle, beautiful and touching. Let us have more of them. Congrats

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  10. Posted by Anonymous on November 25, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    oho itna sunder poem likhegi to where will we all go. I am sure wenever i see dew on the flowers i wl remember you. thanx for putting into words wat we cant think about… Its beautifully written

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    • Posted by Anonymous on November 25, 2011 at 12:17 PM

      Minni thanks love …I know there are but few whose value is much above the rest …and one of the few is u ….lots of love and thanks so much for visiting this blog …Cheers !

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  11. Posted by imtiaz ahmed shariff on November 24, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    I am Flirting with a cloudy slice…..

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    • Imtiaz ji …..Ha ha ha …. Flirting is just the first step …whats beyond no one knows ! Thanks v much for visiting this blog and placing ur precious comments here ..!

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  12. Posted by Harry Rakhraj on November 24, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    ”boond”! How romantic it sounds, though it still means a ”drop”. And ‘dew’! Its His GIFT of the thirst-quenching liquid to His creatures that can’t move: plants .. leaves ..flowers ..!
    ”shabnam – ka – boond.” How awesome, how very divine!!

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    • Thanks Harry ji ..it is always a pleasure to read ur comments ..that are always inspiring and bring out something more in the piece. …”Shanam ki boond” sounds AWESOME …How rich is our language heritage. Alas, I cannot write so beautifully in Hindi ….wish i could ….Thanks V much for visiting this blog …..it is great pleasure to get a comment from u …. remain blessed !

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  13. Posted by Ravinder on November 24, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    This is very beutiful piece of poetry Rashmi. What a way to present a dew-drop! Lovely!!!

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    • Dear Ravinder…Thanks for ur appreciation …….Really means a lot to me .. and dear this is just a ‘drop’ …as we say ‘boond’ in hindi ….Thanks so much for visiting this blog 🙂 and I clasp steadfastly ur continued support for some hitheto wayward doodlings !!

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      • Posted by Anonymous on December 23, 2011 at 3:59 PM

        Lepti rahi Wajood se Khushbo tamaam Raat
        aata Raha hai Yaad Mujhe, wo Tamaam Raat

        Us ne Bare Khaloos se Mangi thi Roshni
        Girte Rahe Makaan pe Jugnoo Tamaam Raat

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